All Comments on 'The Tavern Ch. 1'

Maybe I'm just sick of vampire stories at the moment (I try to avoid them) but this story wasn't my cup of tea. Three problems I had beyond the genre: no explanation for the fight at the start, no explanation for why a presumably human female can best three male soldies in a sword fight, and it seems odd that she would simply accept to become a vampiress without protest (although maybe that's just brainwashing after reading so many novels by Christine Feehan).