All Comments on 'The Teacher -- 750 Words'

A little incomplete; maybe you're waiting on comments to see how it goes.

And the point of this was................?

JR

So, she sounds like the type who thinks that sex is just for making kids, and probably only while she's on her back.

You have to wonder how many times she said no to him before he went rogue.

And, no, it's not all his fault from the angle I see it. At least half I agree, but she had a lot to do with it happening too.

So, yeah, it'll be interesting to see how her attempt at divorce plays out in court.

This story does bring up a 'known problem'. Many women, and some men, lose sexual interest or motivation before the other person does leaving half the partnership frustrated and rejected. The problem is a lack of communication and teamwork. Unilateral action taken by one party will almost always be perceived negatively by the other. Solution, hell if I know I just sit Day after day

Alone on a hill.

A 750 word non story

This highlights a lot of my problem with the 750 word stories. IMO, they just aren't complete.

Nice opening. thanks

The challenge of a 750 word story is to have an introduction, a middle that puts you in the story, and an ending that works. This story was all introduction. Not satisfying by any stretch of the imagination. In other words, it failed miserably. 1 star.

10 Big Blazing Stars for an interesting story about a frigid wife complaining about her husband stepping out on her for sex. The Frigid Wife has a lot to learn. LOL thks, Buster2U

Not even remotely close to a complete story. What’s there was well written though. 3.4*

The problem here is this would be much better served as a longer story. This reads like a set up. A tease. And that's unsatisfying.

Any story, even a 750 one, needs a satisfying conclusion, and this doesn't have that.

And- -??

SO only sex when he insists. Does that mean if he asks or hints it was a NO so he has to beg? Or does she have sex whenever he wants? Not clear to me.

Is it really a story?

Three stars for a 750 word vignette.

JPB

Kinda like a blowjob before sex, most 750s should result in full stories on the same theme.

so the wife was cheating on the husband by refusing sex?

he should divorce her

"10 Big Blazing Stars"

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Do you actually think you're being clever when you use that same idiotic phrase every single time. You're just admitting you're a simpleton.

Huh? This is a weird one.

Poor thing, so desperate she’s taking advice from a whore.

Unfinished.

I appreciate your story adhering to the 750 word rules, but you should have saved this storyline for a real full picture version. It’s written well and the set up is perfect for a number of chapters but you kinda cheated yourself out of a possible Great story.

whats the point?

Unfinished

Top drawer. Very neatly done and sadly misunderstood by so many commentators. Five supernovas.