All Comments on 'The Team'

True a number of typos... And when you get out of a hot tub when it is snowing... The heat stays with you for about 3minutes to get back inside comfortable... Ex NYer... So I do know about that... Loved making love In my hot tub when it snowed...

Did enjoy the story though... grin...

Really well plotted. Goes on and on, but never gets boring, as other long stories do. Fix the typos to make it even better. One time Sarah turns into Stacy. But I gave it 5 stars anyway. Sexy as hell!

Except for a few typo's and shara turning into stacy once, easily the best story i read here in years

First groupsex story in the male perspective I truly enjoyed. Bravo

Certainly one of the hottest group sex stories on this site. Please write more :-)

And a very appropriate ending, which gives a hint of "believable fantasy", compared to many other stories. Thanks!

Not believable. If these girls were so impressed with his skills ONE of them at least would want another go for sure. When people really like sex, they go back. If it's not good they take a pass. Made this ending very weird and out of place.

Great story, i loved it. They should make it into a movie!

As always, spaldan writes superbly, and The Team is no exception. This story has all one could wish for- except for a disappointing ending, where the main characters for unexplained reasons never get together again- disappointing in the sense that many readers would have liked a sequel and perhaps a much happier conclusion. Nevertheless, Five Stars for a great story.

Great story. I felt like the guy while reading it. My girlfriend is out now, she's going to wonder why I'm so hot when she returns. Outstanding. Wish I could give you more than five stars.

Great story but unnecessary downer ending.