All Comments on 'The Tease'

Your descriptions are wonderful, as always, and this story is absolutely intense! Love it.

Though not one for the longer stories, this one was HOT!!!!!!!!!

I'm normally bored beyond belief after the first page... Your story was to engrossing, I found myself itching to read the next page!!!!!

Can I make a suggestion?

Your style of writing is so intoxicating, I'd love to read a story of yours listed in the new 'naked day' comp.

I'll give you a five!!

Nice, very nice - hot, sexy...Wow!

Great story, very intense and gave me some great visuals!

Very hot work. Why can't it be entered as is into the Naked Day competition? It's about nakedness, is it not?

This story is great. rgraham has a nice way of using language, and keeping up the interest.

Sailor

What a delightful story! It has the perfect mix of sex and plot and character, and the detail brings the reader right into the strip club and into the protagonist's head, giving the ending even more punch.

Well done!

Your words flow and come alive! Simply a pleasure to read! Great plot and characterisation intertwined with hot naughty bits! Fab!

Great!!!!!!! Would've loved it more though if the ending was more twisted and Morty was something else...... but overall it was a great read, great form, great style and great plot.

Your angel was such a tease and the table just turn against her. Moral of the story - Never ever tease an illusionist.

How do you do it? It was so great, so smooth, so enticing, and my orgasm was so good. Another great story. I'm jealous.

Four down. Interesting twist, I thoroughly enjoyed it.

In a romantic and/or sensual setting, Sci-Fi & Fantasy do not usually whet my appetite. Still, this tittilating story had me, like everyone else, gasping and aching for more.

As always, incredibly hot and delicious.

A delectible erotic morsel of a story if ever there was one. WOW!

Lovely Rob. I plan to read all of your work posted here and when I can afford it, buy your book. Congratulations, BTW!

would love to read more.

I love that Morty was the tease to Angel. Usually, it's the woman that do the teasing. Nice change of pace in my opinion. Well written as usual. *hugs*

Again, I thought I had commented on this story when I read it. I wonder where my head was all those months ago when I was reading and not commenting. (Don't answer that--I think I'd rather stay clueless!)*giggles*

Great story - not your usual run of the mill, and some really unique aspects. I actually found myself laughing with glee at Angelene getting her comeuppance (if you'll pardon the pun), and really enjoyed this one. Very entertaining erotica, thank you!

Archetypal !