All Comments on 'The Temptation of Abigail Lawson'

please write chapter two it was a lovely story

You really need an editor, or at least do what I do, step away from the story for a few days, then read through it again. You have a lot of typos that detract from the flow of the story, which is good and sweet.

Not a bad little story but a shame about all the typos and spelling mistakes. Sit back and try to read your work as if someone else has written it, then hopefully you'll pick up all the errors. If this fails you, get another person to read through it. The picture you paint of US Bible Belt bigotry is scary: from all I've read and heard about the Bible Belt, residents won't need to go to Hell when they die, they've been living there all their lives.