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sailandoarsailandoarabout 9 years ago
A . . .

. . . . gift from a gifted writer, Thanks yet again.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
A perfectly good story that I've ruined for myself.

I didn't *hate* this story, but I do think I ended up ruining it for myself with too many expectations. I was sorta hoping to find out what happened between Shilana and her son after the epilogue, and I was sorta hoping to see Xanthul'ilia get hers and freeing the souls she'd stolen.

Aw well. Maybe in a later installment... if there is one.

What's here, particularly the bits with the main character learning to live without his eyes, were genuinely pretty good. I freely admit that I'm responsible for ruining the story for myself.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Interesting

All the betrayals made your fantasy world seem like reality.

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