All Comments on 'The Temptress Ch. 01'

This first installment is very nice. I look forward to what happens next.

Great story hope you put up the rest of what you have written and that you also continue the story.

Loved the opener can't wait to read more.

I loved it. I hated that I was only at home at the time I read it.

I just read this for the first time and I was very impressed. You have an excellent writing style, filled with exquisite details and excellent word choices. I'm going to read it again later and try to pick it apart a little bit before I move on to the next chapter. All in all, not a bad start. Thanks for sharing!

i luved it good writing awsome detail this writer is really good and is sure to make plenty more stories just as good if not better