All Comments on 'The Ten Inch Journey Step 01'

by xxxecil

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
great story

cool, i'm the first to respond. excellent story!!! please finish

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Excellent!

I loved this story. I'm usually too lazy to post comments, but I felt obligated to do so in this case. The scenario is a very imaginative, but what's even better is the way the author introduces the background information little by little in a non-linear way. Very well written, and I'm looking forward to reading other chapters.

ScipiiScipiiabout 19 years ago
Excellent

Fascinating scenario, very well-written and has amazing potential. I hope you continue this

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Wonderful!

I can't wait to read what happens next to Ten Inch!

I hope he gets to freedom!

Sebastian4Sebastian4about 19 years ago
Well Done!!

Great job of story telling.

Keep the story line going.

LastoftheGreatMikeysLastoftheGreatMikeysabout 19 years ago
Fun and funny!

You have a great sense of ironic humour. Keep using it!

Tarot BarnesTarot Barnesabout 19 years ago
Great story, absolutely loved it

Although I must admit I would prefer it if you continued your oldest profession story, this excellent piece more than makes up for it, please continue.

alfiechatalfiechatabout 19 years ago
nice to see you back.

I too am loving this story. hope you write more and continue your other series as well. keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Fantastic

Don't stop writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Keep going

Dont stop now. Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
superb!

A truly great story, good to see you back

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Great Story

Great story - keep on writing and see if the poor man can make his dreams come true.

WizardOfMazWizardOfMazover 16 years ago
Nice

Fresh and exciting. Erotic and fantastic. A good story with good sex.

And a good idea too!

Keep up the good work and I hope to read a sequel soon!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
awesome

the plot of this story is rather ingenius. i really enjoyed it and hope you will write more.

shadymshadymover 12 years ago
Different

An interesting take on what might happen after a genetic war. I must ask, why boob talk? Have most females mutated too far to use vocal cords?

I am interested to see where you decide to go with the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Excellent as always

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Age of male slavery

Interesting story. Saw some elements influenced by wheel of time series. Fantastic.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Keep Going

Please keep going with this.

This is one of my favourite stories along with "Enter the Amazon" and I'd love to see it finished.

Its awesome, your awesome, keep going!

trite_readertrite_readeralmost 10 years ago
Good God Man,

Surely you're going to continue this masterpiece??

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
HELL YES YOU SHOULD!!

I don't what got into your head when you thought you should stop writing this, but whatever it is, rip it out violently and BURN IT!! This is a MASTERPIECE! But you know what would work great? Two alternate storylines, one where he DOES give in, and one where he continues his journey! That'd be f***ing AWESOME!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Imaginative!

Unusually well written... enjoyable read

The rest of it please!

CITMCITMabout 8 years ago
Unlikely but would love continuation.

Out of all xxxecil's stories, this is the one I would most like a sequel to.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Real piece of art

This is a real piece of art, the story has the perfect blend of elements to keep a vibrant and charming vibe.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Very interesting premise. I would like for you to continue this if possible.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Love it so far. Interesting premise, just enough history to make it interesting. Loved the mutations of the females, and the fact that the danger in the story is about sex. Sex as a weapon, and means of enslavement.

Please continue...

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