All Comments on 'The Ten Thousand Dollar Decision Ch. 05'

Yours is a special story of worshipful love. Please tell us a lot more - and in detail as soon as is convenient. Thanks for your work.

I've really enjoyed the story so far. I've found it incredibly erotic to read of his suffering and having to endure punishments in the knowledge that he has to sob and cry. Can't wait for more chapters.

Please keep going. Add other male trainees. He needs to learn serving in real world situations. Some moderate CBT & chastity to focus on female power over males by controlling their genitals.

Keep going. Maybe being punished in group setting by one Female.

Allen

I am hopeful that you will be continuing with this story as several more chapters are called for! Gloria's training when she arrives would be good for a couple,and then a few more when they arrive home. Topics such as cuckolding,pegging,forced gay,cbt,etc could be included to have this story conclude with a bang! ~ (*I can't fathom how a person could take the physical punishment of being spanked,paddled,whipped,and caned on a daily basis!)

I find many of the BDSM genre contrived and shallow--poorly thought out and developed. Men, especially, in some of these stories fall into submission and slavery for the dumbest reasons, like to avoid an embarrassment. Could anyone possibly think that to be realistic? I think not!

I found that I could identify with David's emotions and with his pain. I also felt his total love for his wife. His submission was built well on a foundation of years of honest admissions and requests to his wife so the entire story had an air of reality to it.

Like others comments I agree that additional chapters are needed to complete the story. What happens in the rest of David's training? What about Gloria's involvement? How about their lives together as mistress and slave? This is too good a story not to have an ending.

What a wonderful and exciting story? Waiting for many more chapters.

Love your story...please continue, would love to follow Gloria and David's voyage of discovery.

I´m very excited, need to know what happens. Please, more. when will we see next chapter?

What happens, spankedhusband, why not continue this excellent story? You got me nervous and anxious waiting for new chapters. I beg, continue with David´s training-

PLEASE CONTINUE! ! You can't stop now, you were just getting to the meat of the story. Loving every minute

Please ... continue

Come back, please, you have me ... I do not live.

There can be no other reason to abandon the best of the stories they have published in Literotica

It's been years since I wrote this and sent it to Literotica. It was fun to read the chapters and the comments by readers. As to further chapters, I doubt it. The writing is incredibly arduous and it's that which caused me to stop this story. On the other hand, each reader is able to create their own 'end' to the story, incorporating their individual quirks and desires.

That was for your pervert fans who need wank material. They will applaud!!!

just another story with no ending

Great dialog but a bit drug out. Each step into his submission seems a little long for me.

Anxious to read as how you put his wife back into the picture, speed it up a bit, please.

A real disappointment you didn't end the story when he is back with Gloria at home.

I really liked the story, liked the road he ws being led down, very, very disappointed that it stopped with NO conclusion

Dommage qu'elle finit avant la réalisations des prévisions : quinze jours avec la doctoresse et ses assistantes, quinze jours de formation avec Gloria et retour à la maison. Quel bonheur de soumis d'être à la place de David ou Dave

I spurted my cum into Sarah Hall many times