by secretsxywriter
secretsxywriter gives us another female character to love here and she is just fucking adorable.
Please do keep writing! Loved it, couldn’t stop reading. Well done.
And I'm honestly not sure how I ended up reading this story, but I'm glad I did.
As a writer, it was an absolute joy to see things like correct words, verb tenses, spelling and punctuation.
As a reader, this story really just did it for me. Thanks so much for sharing your gift with your readers.
I quite enjoyed this little tale of lust turned to love. I liked the characters and the plot. The ending was so sweet, and your writing is wonderfully done. Nevermind the hot sex. The anal scene quite stood out to me because of how often its often portrayed.
I think my only real criticism is the jealousy bit in there. It felt added just for the sake of conflict.
Overall, beautifullly written
Can't imagine anybody saying this story couldn't be true. Author, thank you.
This story is so hot! I do love the silent, brooding types. They are usually extremely passionate in love and lust.