All Comments on 'The Tent'

This was AWESOME! You have to add more to this one! PLEASE!!

I wanted to like this story. Really, I did, but the spelling, grammar, and punctuation errors bothered me so much I couldn't wade through it.

Clean it up and I'll try again.

That was fucking hot, seriously man fucking hot. And the occasional jabs of humour and slight deviants to the perfect fantasy made the story so real. A very enjoyable read and hope you'll write more in the future

very hot - would have loved to been on a camping trip like this

All this story needed was a thick, long cock ramming into my ass while I read it. Maybe I can convince some of the boys to go camping next weekend...

What the fuck IS a swirly..?

Anyway, good story. You need to work on your grammar and punctuation, though.

Some1 plz tell me what is a whirly?

Fraternity outings and fishing trips; makes angry wonder what really happens, with or with a few shared beverages. Thanks for share a hot story of how it might have been, even if only imagination. To other readers, please venture on to "Reciprocity" for more exhilarating fun and pleasures, without the rain!

Proof reading is so important; honest, I didn't type "angry" words. Damned phone altered my intent. It should read:

Fraternity outings and fishing trips; makes a guy wonder what really happens, with or without a few shared beverages. Thanks for sharing your hot story of how it might have been, even if only imagination. To other readers, please venture on to "Reciprocity" for more exhilarating fun and pleasures, without the rain!

Very nice. Hope to find more about these three.

Totally awesome. I loved the story. It reminds me of my youthful adventures. My story is on here as well. "Becoming a Cock Slut" see my profile.

Loved your story and know just how good it feels! Although my first time wasn't a surprise, (I'd been wanting it for some time) it was just as good. I started out with girls too, then found out it was even better with guys and now I'm totally gay. I didn't experience that time before the worry of STD but, I now have a steady Fuck Buddy and he always cums up my ass bareback.

The guy in this story was lucky he found gay sex is much bettter than sex with a woman. One BIG difference is you dont have to woo a guy to have sex with him. Add to that it is feels so good to have a big cock fill you ass. When it comes to being fucked, I have found that I am a size queen. I love being fucked by a guy wit an 8” to 10” thick cock.

My first was with my step-dad and he was very gentle on insertion, we used vaseline also and back then no worry about std's. My best with my step-dad was the first time I sucked his cock, he had sucked me first and he had used a towel to catch my cum. I had no intention of not swallowing his cum even though he did try to pull out, when I had it all down he asked if I liked it and I said I love the texture and the taste. I still do but just can not find a man to suck, darn the luck. da,cd@frontier.com

Excellent and so believable, like later years in Boy Scouts, LOL