All Comments on 'The Tester'

Wish They had studies like this at my mall.

Loved the worked up about the beer testing months before.

gave more depth to the person as a whole.

Great story, and would have had top comments except for the ending. It just seemed to be incomplete.

Nice work Joe! I like your writing style, original concept, and you avoided all the 'ooh baby ahh' cliches.

Lots of room for sequels too.

I enjoyed the start as you gave the story a rather realistic feel considering your topic.

I think you lost that when you introduced the girl. Considering what was happening she was way to verbal and came off like some local slut which took away from what you started.

Jackie

Very original! Could have used a bit more on the ending. More explanation, Maybe they hook up after, or with Tammy?

Maybe he gets to come back and fuck Tammy? Lot of different places to go.

Thanks for writing!

Sexmate

Gawd - I had this fantasy all through high school! Thank you for the story! (Now where'd I leave that tissue?)

That was a great story! I can't wait to check out more of your work!

Damn, Damn sexy and cool.

I remember doing one of those surveys. Too bad I was rating a movie instead of a condom.

Very good writing skills and the story flowed very well. The sex scenes were very erotic also.

Thank you for the time and effort it took to write this story.

Creative story, fluent writing, hot dialogue, dreamy girl and enticing manhood, would love to read more from the author.

A solid erotic fantasy. Hot chick, uncomplicated sex. The comments regarding the realistic nature of this piece are evidence of a little too much wishful thinking, but that's why its called a fantasy, I guess

wowwww that was amazing, incredibly hot! completely unrealistic situation of course, but you made it seem real - impressive.

easy 5 star