All Comments on 'The Thai Maid Ch. 01'

Delightful read from either perspective. I wish I were you or even Bee. Looking forward to more of your writing.

good story, made me hornyyyyyyy

Love your writing style and this very interesting and erotic story line. I look forward to the next chapter.

What a lovely series. Makes me so wet, reading it. Very well done, especially way you revealed the primary character's inner thoughts.

...method of speaking directly to the reader in the midst of the story. Typically, I don't care for this but you managed to make it work. It felt as though you were telling me the story over a cup of coffee and that only served to make everything more real. I look forward to reading on in the series.

~lucky

lucky:

Charlotte Brontë often employed these second person asides to the reader; I understand they're not to everyone's taste. I think you describe their intended effect quite nicely:

"It felt as though you were telling me the story over a cup of coffee and that only served to make everything more real."

Thanks for your feedback.

Very different than most stories I've found on Literotica. Well written -- I'm wondering what's coming next. At this point we have just enough information to want more.

I surprised my girl, with a hotel weekend, surprising her with another girl, a "maid" who was introduced in darkness, and toys etc.. Your story is classic, I'd love to share. Tim

I would love to be in your place. You are very lucky Victoria.

- Patti

You write so well. Sometimes I wonder if your stories are real life expierenes.

Vil ha sex med en kåt sexy dame.