by Shaima32
Because I knew that another wonderful story from a superb writer would brighten my day. So interesting...as always.
A grand start to yet another fabulous story.
I can't hardly wait for the next several, at least i hope, parts to come.
Already very intrigued by the foundation of the characters and possible story directions.
Much thanks
xo
I have to agree with Anonymous.... (Why does anyone do that?) I love the story and the scene setting is perfect. I like the therapy session style when mixed with 3rd Person.
You character development is wonderful and thorough as ever and I cannot wait to read the subsequent chapters.
Thank you so much for taking the time to write them
Affectionately yours
"A Fan!" - no seriously, it's
Corinne xxxx
This is going to be a very intetesting story. I'm very much looking forward to forthcoming chapters. Thanks. Five stars as usual for your stories.
I can hardly wait for the continuation of this intriguing story!
I like this story, give us more. It's getting interesting and I'm sure it'll get juicier
Jonah loves Karen (she thinks). Jonah is loyal to Karen (she thinks). And yet he's a swinger and has drawn her into a sad and sordid world to the extent that she needs therapy. Some love, some loyalty. You've picked an interesting theme here, Shaima, and I look forward to seeing where it takes us.