by Shaima32
High standard as usual, story remains intriguing. More to follow?
Yes indeed. Make your choices move forward and accept the consequences. Life is for the living.
Another good chapter. Thanks Shaima
a little hard to follow, but still good, can't wait for pt 7 to come out
Loving it all.
I don't think she should worry about explaining it all to an 18-month old though I can see someone obsessing over possible negatives even if they're irrational.
Thank you all for your patience in following this series of chapters and for all your kind comments, I always look forward to reading comments! I would like to thank a user by the name of Unicorn410 for coming up with the original idea and letting me run with it and modify it slightly. It's not something I usually do and it has limitations when it comes to certain kinds of stories but I think this one turned out okay.
As to whether there will be a chapter 7? I'm not sure, it depends on what pops into my mind, I will certainly keep it in mind though.
Thanks Again,
Shaima
Shaima,
Thank you for this story. I was worried initially about asking you to write it for a few reasons. You dispelled any concerns I had and you have once again shown how talented you are as a writer.
If there are more chapters to this tale it will be interesting to see what comes of it. As it stands, I think the tale has been told and most loose ends are tied up.
That said, your character "Jacqueline"... now there is a gold mine waiting to be explored.
Thanks again and I look forward to many more of your stories.
Unicorn410
What a wonderful culmination of the lead up. While I would love to read more of their relationship, I'm not certain it's necessary. It could definitely be left as finished where it is, Valerie has taken the step she needed to. Sure you could add more of her growing into the relationship, but as I said, it's not really necessary.
I await more from your wonderful mind.
Nice writing. Perhaps a new series as Valerie & Karen's relationship evolves (or doesn't)?
Great series Shaima, as usual. I don't know how I've missed this story until now, but I'm glad I read it! Thanks for sharing it with us!
5* Loved it as with your other stories. I notice that some words keep cropping up in this and other entries. These include Pussybow, ties and bow ties, Crooked smiles and a couple or so of others. Variation of words, clothes etc might be worth considering? But hey, what do I know? Keep up the good work. Love the personalities and the emotions.
The slow steep way up to the end was it with all the little nifty nooks or edges just happenings out of the neighborhood or in bad conditions out of family experiences ..... Realy lovely entertaining writing ..... Thank you for your time and sharing