All Comments on 'The Thing That Came On X-Mas Eve'

by Ksennin

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Aydrian almost 10 years ago

While I liked the story I must admit I was a bit disappointed that nothing happened to Kitty. Still excellently written though.

dreamgiver7 almost 10 years ago

Good story, no Kitty though =(

My title says it all. Need my kitten to be ravaged!

gnome_man almost 10 years ago

Ultra Hot Stuff

Ksennin is one of the best on this site. This is a great retelling of a great story. The original was strictly Kitty and the monster, and I was hoping that Katherine would play a bigger role. Perhaps, spend a little one-on-one time with Ororo afterwards. The monster was truly a monster, and that ending was... ominous. Loved it.

Jendeh almost 10 years ago

Excellent

I suppose you left Kitty out of this version because she was like 14 at the time right? I think I like your version of events. The whole story was engrossing. Loved it!