All Comments on 'The Third Gender'

" I was warning a cute pink sundress" ???

Many verbs of wrong tense.

"With a giggled I pulled him close "

I really liked it. Like the previous comment mentioned, it could do with some proof reading and editing, and I'd suggest making your stories a bit longer in the future, I personally prefer multi-page stories. But overall I really like it, sexy dominant narrators are always a turn on for me. Can't wait to see what else you come up with!

i'm trans ,'overnight transition' my dream fantasy.love to read more of this thanks

Nice story, but could do without the mythical transformation part at the end. Otherwise, I had had a very similar night to him once before where until I took off her panties, I didn't know if she was a he or not. Not that it mattered... Dated that gurl for year!

i need a bellyfull of her cum