All Comments on 'The Third Wheel'

Does not mean everyone is

Taking her pills makes you one very unsavory and useless bitch

I only hope someone does you the same favor and /or A condom breaks

Have to admit, impregnation is something I love (in writing anyway), and it being unintentional just seems to make it even better. Excellent work and writing! I hope you keep it up!

Thanks, anonymous!

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I loved the irony of the ending. Good story.

"Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to deceive."

Love how it backfired on Dani and Haley.

If Dani'd only bought her own pills and discarded Mindy's she'd have been okay, and with all the sex they were having they should have both gone on the pill as soon as they started Uni, or at least as soon as Mindy's mention of being on the pill brought up the topic.

Really erotic, too. The almost-non-consent helped.