All Comments on 'The Third Wheel Ch. 01'

Bring on chapter two!

What a great start to what looks like will be a very hot story, can hardly wait for the next chapter.

wonderfully done. just one question? can I be Gwen?

looking forward to more!

HI ALL this is one very hot story but I do so hope that she goes a bit more in to detail .And it was a bit short for my likeing .

Looking to see the next part real soon , I can only hope.

I'm a mature male (or dirty old man, some might say) who found this both literate and stimulating. Let's have another helping soon!

more please

This tale was an extreme turn-on for me. Its been well-written and it was a pleasure reading it. I took a printout of this one and plan to read it on my way to the office tomorrow.

I would give my left ovary to be part of this trio.

Love,

Nice beginning...

a good start...i look forward to reading more.

thank you.