by Isambard82
Pure sensuality! Good buildup and Excellent writing combine to make one of the best stories I've ever read!
Sequel? I hope so!
I loved the way you slowly developed the story. No rushed sex. The way you write made the story seem so natural in its lead up to making love. Looking forward to more. Please continue the story.
To forget David, Becky and Megan introduce their friend to the joys of sex with the girls. Very hot and erotic the story heats up continuing until their exhausted. Oh, yeah - David who? Enjoyable!
You've been mentioned in the New Story Reviews in the Author's Hangout!
Excellent description of first time Sapphic love. Reminiscent of recounting a personal experience. Well done.
beautiful story. The few typos did so little to distract me from the story-telling, I hesitated to mention them.
The openness and welcoming nature of Becky and Megan was as touching as their lovemaking was arousing. Lovers sharing themselves with a willing other tend to look like that. You portrayed that so well. Thank you.
I only found this story cos you recently left laudatory comments on one of mine. You signed your name (always appreciated) so I checked to see if you'd written anything. That's how I came across this delicately erotic little gem. I am most pleased to be able to return the applause for a job well done. Brava!