All Comments on 'The Ties That Bind'

Loved the main character, very dominant. Would only suggest that you tidy up some of the typos in favour of your controlling protagonist. I feel like he would want to be written with meticulous grammar and punctuation, or rather that his author "budgeted" more effort into his literary portrayal ;)

Awesome concept, keep writing. Feel free to check out any of my own stories + feedback would love to hear from you

I DON'T USUALLY READ THIS GENRE. JUST THE RIGHT AMOUNT OF BONDAGE AND PUNISHMENT FOR ME. I WAS ATTRACTED TO HIS DOMINANCE BUT SURPRISINGLY FOR ME, I THOUGHT IT COULD BE A LITTLE BIGGER. LOVED THE ENDING, VERY CLEVER. THANK YOU, I THINK I WOULD ENJOY MORE.