by Wyden Long
Deserves, and shall receive a '5-Star"! This is really enjoyable reading.
Talk about a story where a time machine (of a sort) actually is used as a tool of seduction.
Really enjoying how this is progressing.
Ch 1 was interesting but this one was even better. Very clever and I liked the story moving into not just the usual freeze and do what you want then move on. Thanks for sharing.
...brought to the printed page by a masterfully executed tale, full of magical mysterious, unexplainable occurrancess that would have even Master (Tony Nelson] on "I Dream of Jeannie" struggling to explain.
YOMEYO