All Comments on 'The Toilet Monster Ch. 01'

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MimiRoseMimiRosealmost 12 years ago
Blind...

I really hope the other readers can see the humor that is rampant throughout the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
I'm so...

horrified that I have to continue reading. I want to know what happens. It reminds me of the swamp thing for some reason. Is she going to get eaten? Is she going to run then fall and drag her body across the floor even though she has two perfectly working legs to pick her ass up and keep going? You just. Don't. Know. I have to find out.

semaj2318semaj2318almost 12 years ago
Awesomeness

Yay, more writing from you! Can't wait to see more.

psychoticflyingmonkeypsychoticflyingmonkeyalmost 12 years ago
that first part...

Definitely the funniest set up to any story ever; and i thought bashfullyshameless had that down....

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
WET MY APPETITE

You aroused my interest, & anxious to know what is next.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
fuck

fuck

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I live in Washington state. Aspiring writer, mostly a hobby now. I like off beat humor, weird things, sci-fi, fantasy, horror. Mostly inspired by B-movies, Roger Corman, old school pin-up girls, and Greek and Renaissance sculpture and art.

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