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wishmelycanwishmelycanalmost 12 years ago
creepy

doesnt turn me on but cant stop gotta kno wat happens

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Thank you so much for the laugh.

I needed that today.

Darth_FugueDarth_Fugueover 11 years ago
"WATCH OUT, FOR THAT CRAP!!!"

[This is My Public Comment, to "The Toilet Monster" SERIES!]

Oh...My...God...!

Imagine that this story was told in the style, that was done... for, "GEORGE OF THE JUNGLE"! (NOT the Brendan Fraser Movie, either!)

I mean, the story "describes" that she's 'being violated, by a putrid pile of poop', and then (seconds later), she's saying what's happening, to her: "I'm being violated, by a putrid pile of poop!"

I was LMFAO, the ENITRE TIME that I read the ENTIRE STORY!

Although I did NOT find this EFFECTIVELY EROTIC — let alone, PORNOGRAPHIC — I must admit that this 'Series' had me LMFAO!

Good Job, Writer (and Editor!)

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

What’s next

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
My 2 cents

What a mind you have! Thanks for your time and imagination.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Wtf

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I live in Washington state. Aspiring writer, mostly a hobby now. I like off beat humor, weird things, sci-fi, fantasy, horror. Mostly inspired by B-movies, Roger Corman, old school pin-up girls, and Greek and Renaissance sculpture and art.

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