All Comments on 'The Tool Shed'

And when he comes back she is at death's door and extremely frostbitten

Not BDSM, he has broken one of the Cardinal rules of BDSM, he leaves her alone, tied and freezing. Not a master but an abusive, cold blooded control freak.

A dom who sets up for damage is unworthy. A sub who allows it is foolish. The furniture point can be achieved without the real possibility of harm.

This is a fictional story, it's not real. It's not even based on anything remotely real. Surprised I have to say it.

The story pauses at a very critical and heavy moment. DUH, that's the point. It's a bit of a psychological thriller w/ some BDSM erotica thrown in (it's a little trashy and hyperbolic, some people like it, you don't have to).

This story is written for subs/slaves. It's meant to activate certain emotions, thoughts, and physical states that some people will relate to, perhaps in a sexual way. Those that do relate, get it and they like the story (they also see it for what it is, a story, they don't project).

For anyone else, the story is crafted to make you feel the significance of the slave's punishment.

I wanted you to feel what that slave must have felt. You were meant to ask the question... "What if this is real?". And that's exactly what that slave was thinking when her Master closed the door and locked it. "What if this is real. What if I get frostbite. What if I die."

Get it? She's scared and she's cold, but no real harm has come to her (yet)... you are only left wondering...

Is the temperature cold enough for her to get frostbite?

Does he leave her there to die?

Does he unlock the door minutes later and bring her inside?

Is the Master safely creating an illusion and guiding the slave through a transitional experience with aftercare (and hot cocoa)?

Did the BDSM police rescue the slave and arrest the Master for breaking the rules?

YOU DON'T KNOW!!! So don't assert your egos and don't try to fill in the blanks. It's a story created from my imagination and I get to decide what happens in part two.

There are NO mispellings in fornophilia.

I read your defense of your story and I understand what you are trying to do. However, there are people that read this site to learn more about the lifestyle. Even if fantasy one should not portray a Dom/Master as leaving a sub bound alone ever. It is a safety issue. The fact that your story has her very cold and yes, we do not know what is going to happen next, but just leaving her bound at all alone is not something that should be done. Perhaps if you had prefaced the story with this is a fantasy and should not be done. It does read like he is abusive and I may be wrong in focussing on him leaving her bound as she is blindfolded and he may have closed the door but stayed with her. There is no indication either way.

Your story clearly says he leaves closing the door behind him, so she was left bound alone.

There's always a second person.

When you are creating this type of illusion, there would presumably be a second person already in the shed.

This would have been so much more fun to reveal that in the next chapter when you get a bigger glimpse into the relationship of the Master and slave.

Part of the plot development is about the TRUST the slave has for her Master. There are very subtle references to this in the story.

For example, when the sub almost slips, but her Master doesn't let harm come to her. This is your first safety indicator.

A sadist would let her fall, then yank her collar dragging her chocking and clawing her way through the rocks on hands and knees. See the difference?

The second safety indicator was the slave wondered if her feet are bleeding. To be fair, this is so subtle, it's more of something to be discovered later after reading future chapters, then having the bigger picture come together (illumination).

"You love his forcefulness, his roughness, and his strength, but you crave his control and restraint even more." Does it sound like the slave is describing a twisted fuck? Do you get the difference between a controlling person and a person who has control and restraint?

"He lifts your arms, and cuts the rope off your wrists, depriving you of the intimacy you feel when he unties you.". If there's intimacy, is there not trust? Think about the depth of that statement. What kind of relationship do you think the Master and slave have if cutting the ropes off deprive the slave of intimacy?

Nice to see some comments where people are thinking critically. I'll add a disclaimer, but here's my thoughts on some of this.

As much as I want the world to be a different place, it just isn't. It's not a safe place. Books, works of fiction, stories, however these are healthy ways for people to explore their fantasies. They read about things that they would never do in real life. It's a way to experience or live out the fantasy SAFELY.

Are some people dumb as dirt? Are some people sick and twisted sadists? Are some people crazy? Yep. Remember the Aurora shooting? That guy thought he was the Joker from the Batman movie. Do you think his life would have turned out differently if he had never watched the Batman movies?

Just think about how dangerous bondage can actually be. Using the same logic, do you not agree that every story about bondage requires lots of safety disclaimers?

Can we just accept the fact that world isn't safe and rely a little more on developing our own skills to stay safer? These types of conversations are very valuable to that purpose, but making the world "safer" really isn't. You are only making yourself more comfortable.

I like that it is from the subs point of view. It is obvious to me, as a sub in real life, that the sub in the story trusts her dom. Nothing in this story led me to the conclusion of abuse. The set up was great and I dont feel like it should have had to have been defended or have a disclaimer.

Since the story is very clearly written from the pov of the blindfolded sub, it is easy to understand that she would think he left. She cant see so she is going off sound, so we dont know what the dom actually did. I would like to read a continuation of this story.

Thanks for sharing your talent. Not everyone will get it . Screw those people.