All Comments on 'The Trail West Ch. 07'

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john1946john1946almost 14 years ago
Better and better

It continues to be a really good story and it gets better and better. I look forward to more. Thanks

AllosaurusRexAllosaurusRexalmost 14 years ago
This story just gets better

Keep it going, but don't keep us wating for the next part please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Gets Better!

A great serial.I look forward to each days chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
I was sorry to see the chapter end.

You are doing such a wonderful job on this series. Don't let anyone tell you otherwise.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
It does get better

You have great skill drawing us into the story, and getting to know the people. Good Work .

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

This is a fine story and all, and I'm glad to read it, but I can't for the life of me figure out why it's on literotica.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
The story was fine, and totally believable until...

the lawyer said he'd draw up paperwork in an hour! C'mon, get real!

Other than that, it's a fine story, and I can't wait to read the rest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
A good story

A very good story,but a railhead in Colorada in 1864? Also seven hands on a 2 section ranch at 40 a month that is almost 300 a month.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
trail 07

Ed Grocott

edgrocott@gmail.com

rightbankrightbankover 7 years ago
as entertaining as this has been

the logistics and economics just don't add up. feeding all of the cast of characters and all the livestock, paying wages, buying materials, clothing, and all the other expenses it takes to run ranches that large cannot be sustained by the income projected.

LilacQueen15LilacQueen15over 3 years ago

Excellent ideas. Great story!

Wolf_Man_1962Wolf_Man_1962almost 3 years ago
Great Story

Wow the author said there was no graphic sex scenes yet people still negatively comment about the lack of graphic sex scenes🙄. Woodmanone you do you and ignore the whinners😁👍.

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