All Comments on 'The Train Ride'

Well-written with a good setup. You handled the exhibition play on the train well by making her uncomfortable but not going over the top. I hope you plan to continue the adventure.

great job sassy i like the whole start and the ending i want some more please

You definitely held my attention with your writing. I have always been told ..."leave them wanting more ..." that was accomplished for me. You painted a very nice picture with your words. Hope to see it finished soon. GREAT JOB!

Amazing writing lil one, I hope to read more of this kind of thing soon!

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Kehl

Thanks for all the wonderful feedback on my stories! Sadly, technology and I do not get along and I managed to get locked out of my sassy_sub account. You can find me at this new account. I'll be continuing my writing!

Well done

The sexual tension in this story was palpable. Like a previous reader said, it didn't go 'over the top', which kills the erotic thrill for me. Definitely worth the 5 stars!