All Comments on 'The Training of a Young Submissive Ch. 15'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
More!!!!

This is one of the hottest bdsm series I have read. I have cum to every one and love reading them over and over. So well written and soooo hot. Please please please write more!!!

bluechick1976bluechick1976almost 13 years ago
Truly a masterwork!

This is an incredibly well done story. You see their relationship grow, and how a submissive can truly blossom under the care of an experienced Dom.

And I'll admit, I find her tending to him - without being given any explicit direction to do so - to be particularly erotic. It's still an expression of her service to him, and her gratitude for his love and attention, but it also plays on the timeless theme of rewarding the conquering hero or the warrior finding succor in the arms of his woman. Love it, love it, love it!

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