All Comments on 'The Training of Sara Pt. 01'

Do you work for a government agency that does not exist and can only be named by dropping the Scabble box?

Horrifyingly well written. It is intensely detached and intensely intimate at the same time.

And I shall never share a table with strangers again. Good thing my momma taught me never to accept hand rolled things from strangers. :-/

have you been reading my mind or something..you just wrote in almost every detail one of my Deepest Darkest Fantasies.

Although the story is well written and very griping, your misspellings ruin it. Repeatedly you use "had" when the word is "hand," "he" when you mean "she" or "her." There are numerous other such errors. That makes some areas hard to follow (although imagination does a good job filling in). Your tone and choice of words are brilliant, as FA_ has said very intimate yet distant at the same time. Wonderful story, I enjoyed it immensely. get a new proof reader and you will be golden.

Very graphic

Very dark

Very cruel

Very descriptive

Very well written

Very...erm ...very

I'm just VERY glad I don't share similar fantasies to you

Its like a horror movie you can't turn your eyes away from. Like Jim said extremely dark and shocking but well written at the same time.

Amen to @MJ's comment. I am so very glad I don't share your fantasies.

(@MJ - i wish i had a "love" button for your comment. You should post it under 'poetry')

Wish you'd continue this. I loved it.