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All Comments on 'The Traning of Cinderella'

by MistressVivian

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SomethingInTheWaySheMovesSomethingInTheWaySheMovesover 10 years ago
Couldn't get through it. Just not well written, at all.

But I'm curious about the title. The Traning of Cinderella. Did it have anything to do with Transexuality? Transgenderism? Or were you unable to spell "Training"?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Disappointing

I feel like you were trying to write a sad take off of Ann Rice's "Sleeping Beauty" trilogy. I only got through the first five chapters..maybe it gets better..but I don't think it will.

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