All Comments on 'The Transformation Ch. 02'

you did it again.

Evolution at its 'magically enhanced' finest.

Its been a whole year since the first plague. Should you continue with story (though believe me, this is more than fine as well) are there any other mini communes that are 'recruiting' people like Alex?

Great story

More is needed soo good

I love how you make the subtle transition between "he" and "she".

This was very hot, we need more of this stuff around her.

Keep up the good work.

This is the first male to futanari transformation I've read, good stuff! I like to see authors trying the unusual.

Very good grammar and spelling. Good plot for a short story. Nice character development.

You mention Alex looked more like 20 than 40 after the transformation. It would have been nice to have given some examples of that, more energetic, more flexible, better recovery, whatever.

If you have the time, maybe even take the story out of the bedroom. Of course that would lengthen writing time a lot, so I can understand not doing it.

The story is well worth reading and I enjoyed it.

Thank you for writing it for us TheShadow.