All Comments on 'The Transformation Device Ch. 04'

mm the device I wish ..But it a realy grate story looking forward to more ty . Its hot sexy and realy grate read . T Y leann5red

I love the twist of the story. Love the way it is written and delivered. thank for writing it so much. Hope to see more in the future.

Lately Story's twisting greatly. I like where it's going . It's the best Sci.Fi. erotica i've ever read till now. My favourite one is 1st chapter , actually transformation of Carl to candy .Wish I could be that Candy. Now this chapter is brilliant. Waiting eagerly to have the next part. I hope you add some more great s** between Candy and Sara . And age transgression , I think you gonna apply age decrease-ment on Candy and Sara. Please continue.

When will you finish this story? It has been well over a month. I would like to read the conclusion to this story - Chapter 5.

I would like to apologise for the severe delay in the conclusion to this story. It's 1/2 finished but I have had major health issues recently that needed urgent attention & I have been working on getting a Literary Agent for my other works. I apologise again & I promise the conclusion is coming.

Last Chapter is finished, just need to edit it & I will submit it on Xmas Eve!