All Comments on 'The Transformation of Betty Ch. 02'

"slut" is a thrilling word BUT when it's used incessantly then, like "bitch" and "whore", it not only loses any charm for us "tart lovers", it also has the effect of losing its power as a titillating word. Found myself grimacing every time I read it. Shame really, because it is otherwise a pretty good story...

Seems a pity that the only comment is concerning the use of a single word in the text. I felt it was a very good chapter and it deserves the recognition. Therefore: Great work. I'd say keep it up but I know there are at least ten more chapters I need to read. :D

Dum_u_severely has a one track mind.

Do I like this story....I love it...and am really looking forward to hearing how he transforms this naive housewife into a true sub slut. I have had 2 subs in my life and can say that I never went to the extremes this author did....but I did do similar things...like nipple clip...floggers and paddles.

Believe me...the subs loved it and wanted it time and again. Great story so far.