All Comments on 'The Treasure of Krystal'

by BannanaMan

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
HAHAHAHAHAHA...

...This never happened nor will it ever happen.

You're destined to be a virgin for a lifetime.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very rushed, little build up and the sex scene reads like a textbook. I recommend you work on story pacing if you are looking to get better.

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