All Comments on 'The Trip Back Home!!'

by MasseurCJ

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
nice story

the backdrop you have created causes the mind to wander, so start writing as to how you met the lady how sex was with her. most importantly include conversations in your future stories

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Thumbs Down....

I dint find it erotic..... what happened to you was sex but just a incident was described here....

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
i call bullshit

there is no way this ever actually happened...I doubt the affair in general ever happened.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
awesome

dont ever listen to all these half-brain ramblings. awesome story.well done for a first timer. we will wait for more

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