All Comments on 'The Trip Ch. 07'

poor Chloe. I hope someone puts an end to Ellis Richards soon.

what happened/happening to Chloe is f^cked up in the extreme. Home girl is going to feel even more guilty and with the hangups she already has this isn't looking too good for her state of mind.

What is going on? How come you left us hanging? Please update...please don't kill Chloe off. Where is my happy ending...WHERE IS HAPPY ENDING???????????????????????????

That was so sad that he killed her...I can't wait for him to get what is coming to him. Poor Kim she trys to do the right thing and everyone keeps messing with her, what a shame. Her sister is going to either get killed or kill that psycho. Thanks for a great read. Update soon.

and waiting. I was trying to be patient, but the end of December has come and gone with no signs of the next two chapters. Are you going to update soon? Please say you will!

where is the rest of the story, everyone has been waiting for it

This story was coming along really well: please finish it soon!

I would love to know how this story ends...

I liked Rachel's gf.... not to happy that she was killed

I just read this whole story in one sitting tonight. It was going along really well....what happened? I really would like to see more. Please finish. It is a VERY interesting story.

I need to know what happen once i started reading it i couldn't stop. More please

Is the rest???

band writers 4m publishing if they don't complete their stories

COULD U PLEASE FINISH THIZ STOREY CAUSE IM TIRED OF THIZ HALF WRITTEN AZZ STOREIES YALL GET PPL SO HYPE N READING YALL SHYT THAN YALL DON'T FINISH THIZ SHYT IZ NOT RITE STOP LEAVING UR READERS HANGING N DO UR DAMM WRITING PLEASE

Great story, it has suspense, love, lust, sex! What else could you ask for.....oh yeah maybe a CONCLUSION!! Not trying to be a smart ass, but come on end this fabulous story. I need to know that Ellis gets his ass kicked or killed. (hopefully both), Eric gets jail time (he deserves it!!!) and when (not if) Kim gets her man! I feel sorry for the whole Chloe situation for Rachael, I think she loved her!

I am really enjoying this story I never thought that Ellis would be stupid enough to harm anyone to the point that he has. But, what saddens me more is that this great story hasn't had another posting since I think 2008??? This is just too interesting of a story to just leave as is. It's just to real life and with that being said, I hope that there will be another Chapter to come.

post the end of the story!!!

Get us hooked and leave us in limbo. Finish the story...........

please, please please finish the story.

This is a really great story I wish you would finish it so I know what happens!!!

I'VE BEEN PATIENTLY WAITING FOR CHAPTER 8, WHAT'S TAKING SOOOOOOOO LONG, YOUR STORY IS TERRIFIC, NOW JUST NEED A GREAT ENDING....................GREAT WORK

I just read this TODAY. Please continue this. I literally cried for Choles death. OMG. So good!

It just got real

This is a good story and you have built it up really good. You really need to finish it. I understand that life happens or you my have writer's block. My thinking is that Ellis is about to pay Mr. Eric Jefferies a visit and Rachael is going to hunt down Ellis. I hope Kim tells Brian the truth about everything.

This is a great story

Where are you? Are you going to finish?

Is the entire story posted on some other site?