All Comments on 'The Triplets Pt. 04'

You end with Her throwing up drunk

Sorry, yes I'm a bit antagonistic. But all things considered, there are far far far scarier ways to have ended the chapter.

Wonderful read. The next one will hopefully be lovely as well. Consider a different 'subject' or footnote, not sure what its called, instead of just "The eldest of the triplets" for the description. Give a hint to the content, so if the story gets long people can find some of their favorite parts easier.