All Comments on 'The Triplets Pt. 08'

I love this Aiden! Can't wait for a happily ever after! Maybe a baby added in?

Cliffhangered your story on certain parts of this one. I think we'd've crucified you. So, you ARE forgiven for last chapters cliffhanger, cause as we know. It could have been worse.

I love how it's going so far! I think Es Dane might try to cause a feud a day before or during the wedding. I mean, we haven't read anything about him yet but I think he's gonna try something sneaky/sinister to steal Meredith to hurt Aiden somehow. After all, Aiden did put his claim on Meredith. I think Es Dane wouldn't have been a good match for her anyways. He seemed so proper haha like you couldn't joke with him much. I wonder will a big secret about Aiden's brothers will come out like did Kaleb secretly court a woman or did Aiden's other brother (I can't remember his name lol) do some stuff with his mind control power/thingy that other people don't know about?

While all the romping around is nice, I want to see more of plot and charger development. What happened to that reef dragon? Is he giving up?

The title indicates 3 dragon, so either all triplets will have a fun time with Meredith,all triplets will be her husbands, or each dragon will have their own stories which is interconnect in some artistic way.

I suggest making one(or 2) of the sex scenes be described rather than told

that you still haven't even described what a dragon looks like? Other commenters have asked for character development but you need to figure out how to work in some basic exposition. Fleshing out the world might even help with the character motivations because, so far, none of them have any.

Some questions I'd like to see answered:

Is Ardis a city, city state or country?

Do all the dragons live there?

If so, why? If not, why is it significant that Aiden likes to wander elsewhere?

Is a dragon's color significant for anything other than social class?

Why do dragons spend any time at all passing as human?

Dragons appear to be universally wealthy; how do they make any money?

So far as I can tell, the economy of Ardis is based on fishing. How do the wealthy humans deal with so many even wealthier lizards living nearby, assuming there are any wealthy humans?

What does a fully shifted dragon look like? How big are they? Do they have breath weapons?

Your wording implied that partial shifts are possible. What does that look like?

Once we know how the world works, it'll be easier to understand how the characters work. Frankly, as it is now, they make no sense.