All Comments on 'The Trouble with Pre'

AJP, nice presentation, well prepared, not at all pretentious. Just the right amount of erotic suggestion without interfering with the flow of the story.

Great characters, good conversation, even the protagonist's inner monologues flowed smoothly within the scenes. I like how human,the psychological realism of your writing-style.

Your prefacing posting of "I Never Heard The Comma" was equally brilliant. I personally enjoy mangling the English Language but I still enjoy swell writing as these two stories.

Hoo-boy! AJ, you surely got it in for amateur theatre. I gotta wonder if there is bit of bad history there?

I am looking forward to your future postings.

Well, I will never view the carpark at Heathrow the same way anymore!

Very clever, some great lines: " hampered by a suitcase and a raging erection."

Can't tell which is worse.

Keep it up...

from the great George Carlin and the trouble with the English language when I first read the title

I appreciate the exploration in this story and, of course, the pre-notes.