All Comments on 'The True Measure of Love Ch. 01'

by misterfriz

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
fantasy

Yes, it is a fantasy. But I suggest you do not give up the man's willpower and pride permanently.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
True struggle

I agree with the previous commenter. Make this a struggle of the wills, 'will' he be able to garner cooperation from the other slave and free both of them and his 'honey'

slave2womanslave2womanalmost 13 years ago
excellent

good start, looking forward to read the sequel

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