by slyc_willie
A quest, a hero, a heroine, suspense, intrigue and sex. You've managed to hit all the buttons and very nicely. Waiting for the next part. Well done.
The writing and the plot sucked me in so quickly, fantastic setup and story!
Great story so far, as well as believable characters and dialogue.
This story simple left me in awe. Plot, character development, word choice, grammar & punctuation, action, intrigue, love... it had it all! If I had the money, I could turn this into a movie! Kudos to you! Loved everything about it! Wish there was more though, but I guess I will need to wait 13 years. Haha. Thank you for this wonderful tale...