All Comments on 'The True Oracle Ch. 02'

Very nicely put together and finished. I enjoyed this. Well done.

also are any of your other stories set in this universe? it seems very well thought out.

Short, interesting, and a solid piece. Bravo.

Great story.

Didn't feel like there was enough resolution/definition to Gavin and Adastriana's relationship. Sure, we know that he'll go back in 13 years, but was it lust, love? Will her duty as Oracle require her to fuck a bunch of manservants or will she wait for Gavin?

This piece is much better than it's ratings indicate. It seems slow to start, but I think the development of the characters is great. Well done, and thanks for your work!

Just a thought: you might try reposting this as a single submission. I think the ratings would jump.

Best of luck. I look forward to reading more of your writing.

this is one of the shittiest endings i have ever read!

gavin does that and all and goes for 13.years of loneliness while the bitch has fun for the time being??

seriously??

bullshit

even more than I expected. It is a wonderful story. Thank you for sharing it with me, Scotty ...