All Comments on 'The Truest Control Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Nice start

I like the start, and would like to see how the relationship progresses. A bit more in the next entry please, and some character development, but a good premise.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Brilliant

I just loved this!

Best most original story I have read in a long time.

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