All Comments on 'The Truth About Hell'

More Please

Please give us more.

PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MORE I NEED MORE.

I hope this is only chapter 1! I really wanna know more about both the 'master' demon and the angel. Why was Kerubiel in the labyrinth? I loved the description of the entrance into hell. The ladder leading to the sky in hell. I love when there are descriptions to help create pics in your mind. Please continue it

cannd

Well done. I don't usually visit this category, but dang, that was HOT!! More more more!!

Good start, though I wish you had made the initial teasing longer, ie not gone so quickly into the actual sex. The anticipating is a great part of the fun for this type of story. Look forward to the next chapters.

This story is definitely going to be hot. Add some kink to it!

good story but it doesn't continue...it's a shame.

Kind of good but it was way to short. Why did you not even bother to explain why the angel was being hunted by the demons in the first place? Was this pretty boy angel on some divine errand, or was he just stupid? You picked the kind of story that has been rehashed a billion times over and can rarely be pulled off in a way that can actually get your audience horny enough to cum. Try again. This time don't jack off while writing it and it may come out half way good next time.