All Comments on 'The Truth Ch. 02'

by The_Fractal_King

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Just write more of this

Please?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Doesn't look good for Olivia. Don't think she will make it out

verbicideverbicideover 9 years ago
typical cult

Well, Jim Jones would be proud of the cult, that's for sure. Deny yourselves the intelligence and creativity of your population as long as you can keep them under control. Substitute sex and pleasure with fear and you'd have an islamist state. the result is the same, women with a boot on their neck being treated like chattel. What a sad fantasy.

The_Fractal_KingThe_Fractal_Kingover 9 years agoAuthor
Wait, what?

verbicide, there is already summary of the story in written in the description line but thank you for your input anyway.

Elrond11Elrond11over 9 years ago
Do you even know where you are?

@Verbicide - Do you realize you just criticized a Mind Control story, which was posted to a Mind Control forum, for being about Mind Control?

Are you being deliberately obtuse, or is this just the way you are all the time?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

one of best stories I have read, the slow simmering flames of Olivia's lust are burning away her identity and leading to the depths or heights of submission, desires and obedience. Keep up the great work, and please continue her journey.

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