All Comments on 'The Turning Ch. 01'

and you write sex scenes well....consider making this into a mini-series!

I love it - write the next episode, please.

Great pics..great words...you have me so excited in every way possible...keep going baby...we want more!

You write so very well. You make me feel as though I am a witness to the lust and desire. Please write more soon.

Loved it. You are truly a fantasy.....

CEREAL KILLER.

Tightly wound and well written. Excellent debut green. I look forward to more

SN

An excellent, well crafted piece of work. Congratulaions. Write the next part, please.

click click... so... 5:05? Don't leave us in suspense, deary - you don't want to know what happens if I stay excited for too long.

A lovely story, Red. I loved every word, every line and cannot wait for the next instalment. Please write it VERY soon.

Give us the rest red! Would love to see where this story goes! You are a great writer. *smiles*

your wordsmithing shows in this beautiful, DETAILED, work... I look forward to watching you grow as a writer .. and more..

TMO

Hot! Hot! Hot! Don't stop now...please!

Well sweetie you certainly have me hot now. Can't wait for the next installment. I felt like I was right there with you able to see the pleasure on your face...mmmmmmmmm let me know when the next chapter comes out....Love Jeannie

Keep up the good work. Wonderful story, Green

An excellent first chapter. Great writing and detail. I absolutely loved it.

I enjoyed it very much...

Hope you enjoy my stories as much....

wonderfully planned, paced, and executed. i want to read so much more from this talented writer.

An understanding of the D/s relationship permeates this terribly erotic story from the first word to the last. Power is a given thing, and a shared thing, and provides the heat for a story that is as simple in plot as it is complex in emotion. If you even remotely share the suthor's point of view, this story will slide into you, making you read it over and over again.

Wonderful .. a good depiction of an erotic woman whose need to submit is suddenly revealed to her ... her inner slut encouraged to come out and play ... More please!

ER ...