All Comments on 'The Tutor'

i see this is your first story. you definitely have a long way to go. you didnt catch my interest and half way thru the first page i had to give it up. maybe others will see something in your story. i for one was lost, from the very beginning.

Also, get you someone to edit your story and watch for typos, etc. It was a good story but alomost lost the reader because of the editing issues.

Wonderful story and characterization, I found it extremely erotic and atmospheric. Please keep writing such marvellous work...April