All Comments on 'The Twelfth of Never Ch. 02'

by Maonaigh

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
AWESOME

Awesome story can't wait for chapter 3 to see what happens next to this loving family

LcnmdLcnmdover 8 years ago
Lovely

I cannot wait for the next chapter!

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MajorRewriteMajorRewriteover 8 years ago
I love it to bits.

Brilliant.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Sweet story.

Keep up the good work. I love it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great Writing

Keep the pace going as it is you have a wonderful story going here

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4uover 8 years ago

These girls are so lucky to have a gay "aunt" who is supportive and who can help them navigate their sexual exploration and feelings for another girl/woman. As readers, we are lucky Maonaigh is sharing her stories with us. Thank you and like everyone else, I'm looking forward to its continuation.

jenorma2012jenorma2012over 7 years ago
pretty good

but the movie sleepless in Seattle is not that good of a movie, but this was well written can't wait to read ch 3

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenabout 7 years ago
I love this story

So very much! Thank you for sharing it with us!

StridernorthStridernorthalmost 6 years ago
So Romantic and Sexy!

It is what it is!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

shit

UncertainTUncertainTabout 2 years ago

It's all coming together or it's all going to.. what I said earlier.

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyover 1 year ago

The bells are ringing, this family is influenced with an virus or something loke that, lesbianism ...... I can't recall me being so you g, but for sure searching for the "normal" path running down to become an adult and add on a solid rock to the path, like sapphic love, is truly a uncomfortable situation ..... So "with a little help from a friend", abusing a Beatles song, this may helps a got step further ...... Lovely tale

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I've been writing semi-pro since the 1960s, most of my stories falling under the blanket heading of weird tales. However, I'd written nothing for 5-6 years because my wife was very ill and disabled and care for her was my priority. Some months after her death in December 2013 ...

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