All Comments on 'The Twelve Tables Ch. 07'

OMG that was a heated chapter, you can feel Josh's pain and the turmoil he is feeling. Nik has totally lost sight of what life is and where she stands in it. Well done as usual ... can't wait for more.

Yes please more...................

Have enjoyed your story.

I'm left with one question, and am eager to see how you resolve this.

Family has now lost 2 daughters to poor parenting. This seems a fatal flaw to their world-view.

Resolution

Totally involved. I know I read faster than you can write but this is even more captivating than Bella! Thank you & congrats. Real talent you have. Happy to buy the book.

Really enjoyed, thank you for sharing.

Can't wait to here more about the farm and what Peris' reaction will be. Also what is going to happen to Nik. Is there another tangent for Louisa?

Looking forward to the next chapter!!

She had a nice house but what is her story? What happened that she drinks too much? Why is she unhappy? Maryann was found dating the wrong guy. Who is the sister that is in Melbourne. So many people, so many stories to tell us. Waiting for more in the Donati's new year. Thank you, Ellie!

I'M SO HAPPY THAT I JUST DISCOVERED THIS STOREY ABOUT 4A.M. THIS MORNING. BUT IT'S AFTER A FEW HOURS OF GREAT ENTERTAINMENT, I'M ALREADY WORRIED ABOUT THE FACT THAT THERE'S ONLY 20 CHAPTERS. I FEEL SO INVOLVED IN THEIR LIVES AND YOUR GREAT WRITING MAKES THAT HAPPEN. DEAR HEAVENS ELLE, PLEASE TELL ME YOU STILL COMPOSING MANY MORE CHAPTERS. MORE SEX PLEASE! I'M IN LOVE, IT READS SO SMOOTHLY. xo

I am totally loving this serial story - I hate fiction that has sex every three pages, I prefer a slow build-up and, yes, some real story in addition to the personal relationships! I'm sure I have said this on one of your other serial stories but you really need to look into getting published because I have read far worse erotica/erotic romance/dark fiction than this that people are charging real money for!