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by xelliebabex
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wish2basubabout 8 years agoEllie, I need the next chapter fast. Thought Peri would pass the trial and move on to happily ever after although after the last chapter that Dante might be in the running. Poor Josh. Poor Peri. Poor Andie. Poor Joseph. Poor Antonia. Will spend time worrying until you tell me it all be okay.
Anonymousabout 8 years agoYou didn't give her servitude in every gory detail and you had her ask to go to her home. Even if it is only partially for the right reasons, I could so hug you. What a collective failure on the part of all those masterful men. When the dust and swelling settle, I hope there will be more than an oops, our bad from these two families towards Peri. They need to prove themselves to Peri. Certainly, Nik the Nut must die. Suffering in prison sounds nice, but crazy evil finds a way to spread as long as it exists.
Ellienora35about 8 years agoThis may be your best chapter yet. I loved Bella, but this story is fantastic and it is building to the climax well. Way to keep a Peri strong. She showed that she loved Josh no matter what but she isn't willing to be a doormat. Way to Go! Way for An die to stick up for her. I love that
Anonymousabout 8 years agoI have totally become wrapped in the world of Peri and Josh. I must agree this has been one gripping story and I wait with eager anticipation for the next chapter in their life and love.
Peacerulesover 6 years agoEllie, I’ve read this story multiple times and just made the Gordon Sumner/Sting connection. Very clever how the detective in the airport lounge was named. That certainly was a “Sting”setting up Nic.
Anonymousover 5 years agoI completely agree with Ellienora35, I got excited when Peri expressed wanting to get away from this bizarre lifestyle and I hope that the whole system will be reassessed because it is obviously not working. But I do not hold high hope for Peri's spine, as she seems to be somewhat delusional and still put blame on herself for testifying against the nutjob lady and think she is hurting Josh...
Devilbobyover 3 years agoShe deserves everything she gets. Loving the plot development .
Onward to 13.
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